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honeybees

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laughter can be heard from the inside,
singing from the top of a hill.
the sounds of happy children echo in the distance,
my thoughts - a buzz still.

water trickles through the valley,
flowers dance in the breeze.
i'm waiting to hear your whisper,
a sound that's carried by the bees.

I'm waiting to hear your whisper, the sound that's carried by the bees.

listening too echo of a dream-yanni.

literature writing mood.

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PagesOfDreams's avatar
I think the first and the last lines are the strongest, the rest is a bit cliche, but gosh those first and last lines...I think are quite unique. That is my opinion. :nod: